my family's cat

MY SPECIAL FAMILY MEMBER

One day of four months ago, my mother took a little cat in my house. “Mom, why he is too ugly, I do not want him”, this is the comment of my younger sister when she saw the little cat at the first time. But only two months later, the cat made she changed, she liked to be with the cat. When she had something to eat, she always shared with him. He really became my special family’s member.
“Ugly cat” is exactly word to describe his appearance at that time. He was too small that he could lie perfectly in a small dish. The head was bigger than his body. His fur was not much enough for him to cover his body, you can see almost his ribs. The mouth only had a few whiskers. He only had the eyes were like a cat, they were really bright. But these things just were him in the past, now he is a beautiful and strong cat. He has a big body is covered by a smooth fur, the ears always listen to every sound of the mouse, the eyes are more and more bright and send out the ray of the light which make the mouse do not brave enough to action.
He likes the child in my house .After he had had the meal he would find somebody to play with him, the person he chose and this person is also willing to play with him is not someone else besides my younger sister. She will use a branch of the tree, makes it move left and right in front of him for him to chases this branch, they play with together funnily .When my sister does not want to play with him, he will play with himself, he catches his shadow on the ground, he turns around to catch his tail., and something like that. When he gets sick, all of member in my family are worried about him, my mother goes to the drugs store for the animals to buy drugs for him, my sister always asks him” how are you?, why you don’t play with me?, my father sometimes asks my mother about him…

In the noon, he is a child but when the light is replaced by the dark, when every body take a rest, is the time for he to act to reduce the mouse’s action .By quickly hearing and the sense whisker, he can define exactly the position of the mouse easily. Next step is waiting until the suitable chance to action. At last, this moment comes, he snatches the mouse suddenly. Next ,I can hear the sound of many things: the sound mouse tries to get out the claws of my cat, the sound of my cat tries to keep the mouse…in the end ,there is only the sound of my cat breath, he wins. He jumps down proudly with the big mouse in his mouth.
Do you know the funny cartoon called “Tom and Jerry”? The cat in this cartoon is stupid; he is always tricked by the mouse and certainty that he will never catch a mouse. Although my cat can not do a lot of thing as Tom but he can do the thing that Tom can not do, catching the mouse. The difference thing between my cat and tom is he is always loved by my family but Tom is not, Tom always alone.
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Introduction
Thesis: he is my special member in my family
Body
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Topic: he is a beautiful and strong cat although in the past he was an ugly cat
-He is slim, do not has enough fur to cover his body
-Now he is a beautiful and strong cat
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Topic: he likes a child in my family.
-He plays with my sister

-When he gets sick, my family worries about him
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Topic: in the dark, he is a wonderful security of my house
- He catches the mouse
Concluding: he is my special member of my family and always is love by my family