dogs and bananas

DOGS AND BANANAS

Do you afraid of dog? I don’t mention to all of dog but big dog. I’m really scare of dogs. When I was a little girl, I used to be bitten by dogs, not only once but also a lot of times. There was a times that I nearly was bite by my neighbor’s dogs. I don’t remember exactly but it was in the season that my garden began having ripened bananas, my mother ordered me to offer some bananas to my grand mom.
My mother chose the big, fresh and ripened bananas and ordered me to offer to my grand mom. My grand mom’s house wasn’t far away from my house, but if I want to go to her house, I had to pass my neighbor’s house who has four big dogs. so I refused to go to my grand mom’s house alone but my father said it would be ok if I didn’t run ,I trusted my father so I agreed to go to my grand mom’s house. I received bananas from my mom and also took a banana to eat. I prayed that there was no dogs in front of my neighbor’s house. I went out my house I realized that there were four dogs in front of my neighbor’s house. I was a little scare, I sopped, my heart was thumping. Remember my father saying” don’t run” so I stepped one by one. I wanted to reduce my scare so I peeled a bananas and ate. When I nearly passed them, suddenly one of them stood up and began roaring, then one by one stood up and went toward to me. They started barking to me. I was so scare my soul had gone somewhere, my heart was thumping. I didn’t know what to do.
I was so scare that I could not remember my father saying, I only want to escape from them immediately .I threw bananas to them and ran. I shouted while I kept banana in my mouth:” mom, dad, help me! help me!”. My father run out from my house when he heard my shouting, some of my neighbors also went to my house to know what happened. The problem was there was any dogs, besides squashed bananas.” May be they was scare about my shouting, so they cane back their house”-one of my neighbor said. My father said that poor my grand mom,she had not bananas to eat until there were some ripened bananas. And I knew that the person who brought the bananas would not me or at least there would some one went with me to ensure that I did not threw bananas again.
You know some time the dogs are lovely and useful but sometimes they really fierce. If you do not want to be bitten by the dogs you had better not show up suddenly near the dogs ,do not run when the dog see you and you must have some things to protect yourself from the dogs but never use bananas to throw to them because will not effective and you will not have any thing to eat like my grand mom.
OUTLINE:
Introduction:
Thesis statement: I nearly was bitten by my neighbor’s dogs when I offered bananas to my grand mom.
Body:
Paragraph1:
Topic: My mother ordered me to offered bananas to my grand mom
+I refused to go to my grand mom’s house because I had to pass my neighbor’s house where had four big dogs
+I nearly passed the dogs, suddenly one of them stood up and began roaring
+The dogs started barking to me
+I really scared of them
Paraggraph2
Topic: I escaped from them immediately
+I threw the bananas to them
+I was shouting and running
+My father came to me
+Some of my neighbors also came to my house
+my grand mom did not have any bananas to eat
Including:
Some way to keep you safe from the dogs: don’t show up suddenly near them ,don’t run when them see you…