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Thứ Ba, 10 tháng 11, 2009

friendship

“One day, if you want to cry, please call me. I am not sure that I can make you feel better but I will cry with you. One day, if you want to run away, please call me. I do not stop you, I will run with you. One day, if you do not to listen to anyone, please call me. I will come with you and say nothing. One day, you call me but I do not answer you, please come with me because I need you at that time” This is the statement that I like best. The friendship in that statement is so beautiful. Friendship makes you life is full of color: green as hope, red as enthusiasm, pink as happiness, purple as faithfulness, white as honesty, a little yellow as angry and sadness. If your life has no friendship, it is only black as alone, cheerlessness and cold. So, friendship is a wonderful present for your life although sometimes it makes you hard to realize.
Friendship is a wonderful present for your life. It brings to you a lot of emotions. You are happy when your friend is eager to tell you about how her boyfriend says “I love you” to her, with a big smile on her face. At that time, you will feel it likes you are said this sentence to you. You can not smile when seeing your friend who is always cheerful and smiling, going to you with a tired face and no smiling. You can not stop wondering you what happen to your friend, although she is just late for some minutes. Friendship can delete the distance between you and your friends, making you and your friends are nearer and nearer. You will tell your serest to your friend although you know that your friend is not a person who can keep your serest .In front of your friends, you can do anything that you do not care about the way of behavior but do not too impolite .You are so understanding your friend so that you can know what your friends want only with looking at her eyes or a little expression on your friend’s face.
Sometimes, friendship makes you hard to realize unless you have experienced. Friendship is also need some trouble to make it more exciting and meaningful. Have you ever heard the story about the friendship between two guys? One of them was successful but another haven not successful yet. He wanted to help his friend .So he hurt his friend’s ego to encourage his friend’s power to study to get successful. At first, he who was hurt his ego was angry with his friend but when he was successful and knew that his friend did that to help him. As a result, their friendship was more and more firm. Yes, this is the story about the friendship between Luu Binh and Duong Le. This is the type of true friendship.
So, you see. Friendship is not completing happy, it also has some troubles to makes your friendship more beautiful, more meaningful, more and more amazing.

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